Fan Fiction (Story)

BOOM!!! I cought my first prey. I was an apprentice, an apprentice with an attiude. I hated help. I wanted to be independent. I heard a noise. Its coming from the bushes. I smelled a vole. I quickly got down into stalking postion, and i creeped towards the vole. Then i pounced and started to sink my sharp fangs into his neck, pulling off flesh. I kept a tight grip. I shook my head violently putting the voles life to an end. By the time it was dead i had pure red blood all over my face, so i started to wash my face. Then i ran back to my territorry in Thunderclan. I crunched on the vole with a look of victory in my eyes.

Hawkpaw padded to her friend with a fat mouse in her jaws, Look, Darkpaw, I caught my first prey! Kool, you did too!